Armed with a completed second outline, we return for our 50th episode! This episode begins with a summary of the key changes planned for our second draft. In the next script, we’ll be fully integrating voiceover from page 1 and streamlining the

c49: Script Draft 1, Beat 42

May 24th, 2023 55m 5s

Script Content:-Zoya and Csaba attend the Katallian service. They discover the portal door is locked and one way (but Ocean Songbird has a key). As early attendees they are drafted into a confession ritual.-Meanwhile the priests discover an una

c48: Script Draft 1, Beats 37-41

Apr 16th, 2023 41m 16s

Script Content:-Zoya gets caught by Alltaf and assigned the task of killing Tim-The leadup to Tim’s death from Zoya’s perspective-The aftermath of Tim’s death: burying the body and lying to Cranium-Caught by Cranium, Csaba knocks out Cranium an

c47: Script Draft 1, Beats 32-36

Feb 1st, 2023 45m 22s

Another double episode with pages from both Ted and Jon. Script Content:– Richard and Alexis urge Zoya to take Tim’s deal at the Gaia awards-Zoya is initiated into Alltaf-Zoya witnesses Tim trying to force his way through the Alltaf lobby-Richa

c46: Script Draft 1, Beats 27-31

Jan 30th, 2023 54m 35s

In this double episode, we get pages from both Ted and Jon. Script Content:-Tim, Zoya, and Csaba build shelters on Katall-Tim hunts for a suitable murder target-Zoya offers Tim an out (he doesn’t take it)-Tim discovers Cranium’s secret TV lair

c45: Script Draft 1, Beat 26

Jan 9th, 2023 24m 2s

Tim, Zoya and Csaba enter Katall, learn about the naturalist entrance contract, witness a service that includes funeral rites and penitence for conjuring, join the Katallian religion, receive the assignment of building a shelter. Discussion: na

c44: Script Draft 1, Beats 23-25

Jan 2nd, 2023 38m 6s

Tim meets Csaba for dinner at a fancy Magnurbia restaurant, Csaba tells the story of Alltaf’s founding, Tim receives instructions for the third trial, Zoya offers Tim the chance to back out. Discussion: whether Tim should know who he’s meeting

c43: Script Draft 1, Beat 22

Dec 26th, 2022 27m 16s

Visiting Pompeii, finding the clue “Come in, have a drink, stay a while”, getting attacked by a leopard, turning pain on to find the right door, turning mind altering substances on to cross the lava river, turning ejection off to unlock the fin

c42: Script Draft 1, Beats 18-21

Aug 23rd, 2022 45m 56s

Taking the job in Applonia, posing as an elephant-headed god, building a temple for Applewhite, planting a backdoor, failing to help the Applonian people, onward to Wang’s world. Discussion: being an elephant versus just being invisible, defini

c41: Script Draft 1, Beats 15-17

Aug 8th, 2022 22m 59s

Receiving the first trial, finding the trial difficult, posting an ad, finding Applewhite. Discussion: introduction of voiceover, making Applewhite weirder, drawing on the Incal for exec inspiration.

c40: Script Draft 1, Beats 10-13

Jul 18th, 2022 41m

Obtaining Alltaf’s address, fighting through Alltaf’s lobby, signaling to Zoya, blackmailing Zoya. Discussion: rules of Alltaf’s lobby, usefulness of the Bukhari reference, communication of blackmail stakes, how secret is Alltaf?

c39: Script Draft 1, Beats 6-9

Mar 8th, 2022 37m 44s

Magnurbia, Tim’s defaultist son, breaking up with Arturo. Discussion: How to handle the exec visually.

c38: Script Draft 1, Beats 4-5

Feb 8th, 2022 54m 47s

Tim and Zoya sign on the line, Gaia Awards nominees. Discussion: making the nominees interesting, scale of the Gaias, story perspective.

c37: Script Draft 1, Beats 2-3

Jan 25th, 2022 30m 38s

Gaia awards pre-party, Tim and Arturo panic about losing, and Tim proposes a deal to Zoya. Discussion: how to reveal Tim and Arturo’s panic, should concierge be an AI, comic book visual language.