D-girl extraordinaire Carter Swan and journeyman scribe Philip Eisner deconstruct the first 15 pages of your screenplay and tell you why it sucks. Also: racial epithets, meandering rants, non-sequiturs, the inside scoop on how movies really get made, and occasional nudity.If you have a tough skin and would like your screenplay to be considered for The First 15, head over to: trigg.la/episodes/the-first-15/ , and fill out the form!