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So, we're back with Scar.
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Dan
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is still having a mental health day and I still
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need to sign a whole bunch of pages. And
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Scar is here to keep me company for
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Intentionally Blank this week. And
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we're going to talk about something fun because
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we're going to talk about writing
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while having other jobs and
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things like that, right? Yes. Dan
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has had
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a real job his
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whole life. Yep. And
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me and Dan, Dan had a real job for
0:34
a little while.
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Oh, a long while. Yeah, a long-ish
0:37
while. But I mean, he sold
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his first book in the early 20s. It's
0:42
been 15 years, easily. Good heavens. So,
0:45
he had like eight years of a real job.
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Yeah. And I never had a real job, but I had a fake
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job that I wrote during. So,
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I thought it might be useful to just talk about
0:55
like your experience because
0:58
you finished the same book several times and
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then you finished at least two
1:03
other books that I know of. Yes. I
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finished a novel-length memoir.
1:08
I finished the project that you and I worked
1:10
on. Yep. Where you gave me the 10,000 word outline
1:12
and then. Yep. This was
1:14
one of the very early stabs at what
1:17
became Adamant, which I still haven't managed to
1:19
find a thing to do with. Just didn't
1:21
quite work out. So, I sent it to my agent and
1:23
didn't click. But it was one of my very
1:25
first attempts at co-authoring was with Scar. And
1:27
you were so busy. You were in the middle of Wheel
1:29
of Time at that time, which this
1:32
is a funny story. We can just randomly go off,
1:34
but it's about this. I had written the
1:37
novel-length treatment
1:38
of the outline that you had given me. Yeah.
1:41
And we'd put it through writing group and you had just never
1:43
had time to brandify
1:46
it. Yeah. Brandalize
1:48
it. And then finally, like a year and a half after it was
1:50
finished
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and you just didn't have time to mess with it, you called
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me up and said, hey, I think, I mean,
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didn't you? Yes. At one point you
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said, Scar, why don't you just take it?
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Yeah, fiddle with it and then you know market
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it around. Yeah, and I said no, I'll wait I'd
2:04
love to be co-authoring with Brandon and so we
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waited more and then one
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day you called me on the phone and said
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Hey, it's time. I finally have time
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to really get after this novel thing
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You know probably for the next couple of months Let's
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do this and I was just like Brandon you've
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reached me. I'm on Fort Bragg I'm
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going to Afghanistan for a year I I'm not
2:25
gonna be able to help participate in this you're just
2:28
like out at which point It turned
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into a work for hire. Yeah, and at which
2:32
point I paid you. Yep, so that your
2:34
time wasted Yeah, and then
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honestly, we just trumped it We did show it
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to Joshua but tried to like make
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it into episodes at one point It episodes
2:43
at one point like I've moved
2:45
it into the Cosmere if I ever do it It'll
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be in the Cosmere cool. And so that'll
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change in the back of my head. It's hovering there, but
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it's still a really cool idea It's just never
2:54
quite panned out that we did do a short story together. That
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was mostly you that turned out great
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Yeah, oh, can I tell that story and
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correct me if I get details wrong? I do my level
3:03
best but mm-hmm you came to me and
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said scar I've been invited to be in anthology
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about men in power armor. Yep I
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like what you've been giving us in writing group and I told
3:12
them I Will be in this anthology
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if I can have a co-author. Yeah, they said yes,
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and you said scar Do you want to write a story about men in power
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armor, and I did yeah, I wrote
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an 8500 word short story Gave
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it to you and you said I'm
3:26
super busy. I read this. I like it send
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it to the editor so I sent it straight to the
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editor and He liked
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it came back and said I've got about a dozen changes
3:35
that I want you to make and I agreed with all them They were fine.
3:37
So I made the changes in word using crack
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changes and then send it to you again
3:42
Yep, you liked them you fiddled with it
3:44
some more yourself. Not a lot. No,
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I've always been very honest people scar wrote
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this story This is scar story
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to the point that whenever anyone wants
3:53
to anthologize it or something I say you got to go to scar.
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This is his story. I was there as
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kind of an editorial Overseer seeing
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force, it is 98% star, right? So
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we sent it to the editor and
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it got published in armored
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by a really great editor to work
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with. Vayne put it out. I think
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it was fantastic story. Thank you. I really
4:15
liked that story. It was fun to write. The
4:18
payout for it was 500 bucks upfront,
4:21
right? And then royalties afterwards. I actually got a couple
4:23
of royalty checks for a few seconds for that. But
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the check went to Joshua and
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he sent me $250 and you $250.
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Literally the next time we saw
4:34
each other physically, you handed me
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a check for 250 bucks and said, I didn't
4:39
really do a ton on this story. This
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money belongs to you. And I'm like, Oh, thanks. I'll
4:43
make my car payment this month. I mean, it really
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is the way it was. Like I thought
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we might be able to coauthor more on
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that, but it turns out you just had
4:52
a really killer idea for a really good
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story. And I really
4:56
liked it. If it had been super busted, then
4:59
we would have been in a place, but
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I mean, I thought it was just really
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good. So there you go. Mm-hmm. So
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if you guys want to read it, it's called H A R
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R E with periods. It's an acronym.
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If you ever put that up, like just for
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sale, like on Kindle or anything
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like that. I have not in the back of my
5:18
mind. It's like,
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I don't know if I can, maybe I
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should.
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Yeah. They only bought first serial rights
5:24
or something like that. So you
5:26
should be able to just put that up if you want
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to. Yeah. Well, now that's in my
5:30
brain. I may actually do that. Yeah.
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Very
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cool. Yep.
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We'll find a place. We'll tell people when it's up. Scar's
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excellent power armor, a short story that
5:39
has coincidentally my name on it. Yes. I've
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read a few reviews of it. Short stories
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don't get a lot of reviews on the internet. And
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there was one guy that absolutely hated it.
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That's on this end of the bell curve. And then there's another guy
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that said it was the best story in the anthology. And
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I'm forever thankful to that guy. Cause
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that made me very happy. I'm sure they
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can go buy the anthology. Yeah, I'm
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sure it's still on Amazon. It's out there. So,
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you've been just always writing. Your
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father's a writer too. I've read his book.
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He's got two books on Amazon. I've
6:13
only read the first one. Yep. Are
6:15
they two standalones? They are, they're two standalones.
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Same universe, but standalones.
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And you were kind of raised by your father on
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golden and silver age science fiction. Yep.
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Every time I got bored as a young man growing up, I
6:27
would just go into my dad's study and
6:30
look at his bookshelves and know that almost
6:32
anything I pulled down was going to be fun to read. And
6:35
sometimes I'd ask him for recommendations
6:37
and he'd hand me a Heinlein
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that I hadn't read or Vance. I
6:42
read Jack Vance because of you. I had never read
6:45
Jack Vance and I'd never read David Gemmel
6:47
until you got me reading him. And both of them
6:50
are people I really enjoy. That
6:52
is fantastic. How many Gemmel awards do you have
6:54
up on the wall of things? I wish that we're still
6:56
going. That was the best award, the
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Gemmel Award, named for him. The
7:00
one where the award was a battle axe, a battle
7:02
axe or a dagger. Or a dagger, yeah. It's
7:04
a little battle axe. The dagger is the stabby from
7:07
Reddit. Oh, okay. So
7:09
there's like a little battle axe and a big battle axe. If
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you get nominated for the Gemmel, you get the little
7:13
one. If you win, you get the big one. And you've got a big one.
7:16
And I've got a big one. Yep, it was only around for like five or
7:18
six years. And they're actually
7:20
like replica battle axes from
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the books. Yeah, the naga
7:25
or something. The butterfly axe from one
7:27
of the characters from the main guy
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that's in more of them than any of the other ones. Where
7:32
they'd done some replicas and sold
7:34
them to fans and they had a few extra after
7:37
he passed away. They're like, hey, what if we just made
7:39
this the award? I love his stuff.
7:41
Yeah. Good writer. I remember seeing
7:43
him once at convention, were you there? Where
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he got up and said, I'm basically
7:48
the Louis Lamour of fantasy. He
7:51
called himself that. Wow. Or
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he said, you know, I write stories about
7:56
people that you're just not sure about. But
7:59
by the end. You'll be sure about them.
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I mean, I can't fault him. I don't think he was
8:04
wrong Yep, were you thinking that that's
8:06
a little bit? I mean, wow what a claim to make
8:08
or was it like in the context? This
8:11
was a really good description of his work to
8:13
people who haven't read his work, right? He wasn't bragging.
8:16
He was on the panel. Like how would you explain your
8:18
writings? Like well, you know lots of standalone
8:21
similar themes Really regular
8:24
releasing them kind of about people who are rough
8:26
around the edges, but in their hearts They're
8:28
good folk. Mm-hmm. That's kind of how he
8:30
pitched who he was and I thought
8:32
it was a pretty good pitch. Yeah Accurate
8:35
David Gemmel G-e-m-m-e-l. Yep.
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Is it two L's? I do not know I feel bad
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for not remembering but how
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did you ever write stories? Well both
8:45
having a job and in the military well
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Undeployment. Mm-hmm. I'm sure you've heard
8:51
I mentioned in the last episode, you know, hurry
8:53
up and wait that happens Mm-hmm. Sometimes
8:56
the hurry up and wait happens where you're just
8:59
sitting in your hooch and you have your laptop So
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you got three days nothing's happening. You may as
9:04
well sit down and write one of my
9:06
deployments was horrifying
9:09
in That my
9:11
job for months was to
9:13
watch a little box an electronic
9:16
box and If
9:19
certain alarms went off I had to go do things. Mm-hmm,
9:22
but they rarely went off I
9:24
mean when they went off it was exciting and you go
9:26
do stuff But they rarely went off and you're just sitting
9:28
in this scorching hot box
9:31
on a base in Afghanistan waiting
9:33
for this computer to go off and Yeah,
9:38
I sitting there I wrote a 20,000 word
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was that a novella in the well, mm-hmm. Do
9:42
you have fans could they like
9:44
I Didn't
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ask if they have air conditioning. I'm just I know that
9:49
one's just gonna be a chuckle Yeah, could you
9:51
like turn a fan on you? Yes, okay, if you
9:53
brought one Yeah, okay, and
9:55
I mean it was an electronic box. So there was plenty
9:58
of power piped into this thing but
10:00
the machines all created heat, you created
10:02
heat, the sun created heat, yes, you could
10:04
put a fan on, but fans
10:07
are most useful when you're sweating. Because
10:10
then it evaporates the sweat. On
10:12
the gun, when we'd be driving down places,
10:14
I discovered early on that you could
10:17
sit in such a way, you could see your sector
10:19
of fire, and if you rolled your sleeves
10:21
down, a lot of guys like to have them up, and I
10:24
do too, except in this situation where if you roll
10:26
them down, you can hold it in such a way that
10:28
the wind from your passage goes up your sleeve,
10:31
across your chest and back and out the other sleeve,
10:34
which is lovely. So
10:36
when you're- That doesn't help in the box. Hurrying
10:39
up and waiting. Don't they have like stuff for you, aren't
10:41
they like, go clean the
10:43
floors with toothbrushes? Like they
10:45
joke about that in movies and things. They
10:48
do, and there's only so much of that that you
10:50
can do. And especially in my MOS,
10:54
they have other things they want you to do. Which
10:57
sometimes involve waiting for days
10:59
at a time for the little bell on the box to ring.
11:01
Cause nobody else can react appropriately when
11:04
it goes off. There's very complicated things you have
11:06
to do. How did you write back
11:08
when you were a writer? Cause we touched
11:10
on this last episode, but it's
11:12
actually pretty relevant to this one. You
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went and became a tech writer. I did. Which
11:17
as you've always said, you're glad for the job, glad
11:19
for the work, but it wasn't a particularly
11:22
creative endeavor. Nope. How
11:24
I wrote while I did that was I would work
11:27
quickly to get ahead of things. And
11:29
then at my desk, even
11:32
my cubicle, I was always very careful to sit
11:34
so that nobody could see my monitor unless
11:36
they were in my cubicle. And sometimes
11:39
instead of having the latest manual up, I would
11:41
have my novel and I would just go at it. Also
11:44
just going home and biting the bullet and saying, all
11:46
my writing energy is used,
11:49
but nope, still gonna do some. You're
11:51
gonna push yourself anyway. Yep. Yeah,
11:54
I mean, working at the hotel,
11:57
like I did, was super, super lucky
11:59
as a job. I think I've told this story before. I applied
12:02
for two jobs at the same time. I worked at the library
12:04
and got fired from the library. The
12:08
BYU library. Because people kept coming up and talking to you.
12:11
No, I loved when people talked to me. I actually
12:13
have kind of a service-oriented sort of mindset, and
12:15
that would be interrupting, but I would never resent it.
12:19
Like when I worked at the hotel, if people came in
12:21
and needed something, like that's what my main job
12:23
was, right? And I wanted to be there for them. Like when
12:25
I was sitting at the hotel in Walden, there wasn't really guilt,
12:27
you know? Like
12:34
the bosses knew it was fine, but part
12:37
of the reason I could tell myself
12:39
I'm doing a good job is because when someone came in, I put it all
12:41
down and I did my best to help them. And
12:45
if I didn't
12:47
do that, I don't think I could have actually written
12:49
because I would have been feeling guilty not doing
12:52
my actual job. And when I
12:54
was at the reference desk on the fifth floor
12:56
at the BYU library, if someone
12:58
came up and wanted help finding a book, like
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that's fun.
13:02
Interacting with people, helping them,
13:05
doing the job, but I think
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I've told this before, that wasn't my actual job.
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Oh, I thought it would be. That's the
13:12
job I applied for. That's the job I interviewed
13:14
for. But what I didn't realize
13:16
is when you get that job,
13:19
what you're really doing is then sitting at the
13:21
help desk and you are doing research
13:24
for the librarians. As
13:28
most of it involved, they would get
13:30
these booklets. They're like, here are all the new books we've
13:32
released. And they want to know which we
13:34
have in the library and which we don't so
13:36
that they can choose whether to fill out
13:39
the collection or not, right? Something that does
13:41
need to be done. You don't want your high-paid
13:43
librarians spending all their time searching.
13:46
And so my job for hours on
13:48
end was to sit at that desk and
13:50
it was to look and see, do we have a book?
13:53
Circle it if we do. Exit out if
13:55
we don't. Actually, it was reversed. And
13:57
hours and hours and hours of just doing that. And
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I was wasn't very good at it because
14:03
as we talked about last week Like
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this is the worst sort of work
14:07
to give me if you give me something that's fully
14:10
engaging Mm-hmm like going and helping
14:12
somebody find a book like that's really
14:14
engaging sure and or you know Someone
14:16
comes and they're like hey, I need to check into
14:19
the hotel. You know, it's actually really engaging
14:21
There's a lot of things to do and make
14:23
sure that they're taken care of and they get to the room But
14:26
if I'm sitting at a desk doing something monotonous
14:28
that doesn't use my whole brain But just enough
14:30
of it to keep me from being able
14:33
to do anything else I am miserable and
14:35
I assume correct me if I'm wrong you
14:38
would sometimes Come to yourself. Yeah
14:40
with your pen hovering over the last thing you x'd out
14:43
and you realize it's been 40 minutes Not
14:45
really that but I would sometimes come to me like
14:48
I x that out Did I actually look that up or
14:50
did I look up the one above it twice? Right
14:53
and things like that and like
14:55
this is why aside I can't
14:58
do choir. Oh The church
15:00
loves members to go singing choirs. You always
15:02
get invited choir is Absolute
15:06
just purgatory for me really
15:08
because doing the same thing Over
15:10
and over again. Mmm. Yeah same
15:13
song but with enough of your
15:15
brain that you can't be thinking of
15:17
something else Just enough
15:19
of it that you can feel
15:21
the ideas waving at you You
15:23
can't give them anything is just absolute
15:26
misery and this job was absolute misery.
15:28
So I'm glad they fired me Yeah, but they called me
15:30
and said You're a square peg
15:33
in a round hole. It's what they actually
15:35
told me they use that phrase They use that exact
15:37
phrase well good for them and they didn't tell
15:39
me there was no like Quality
15:41
control help like they said
15:44
you've been getting too many of these wrong and I'm like I have
15:46
been why didn't you say anything? I've been doing this for a week
15:48
and it's miserable. I'd at least like to do it Well,
15:51
if I knew you know get some feedback
15:53
get some feedback Maybe I can put a system into
15:55
place to keep myself from but
15:58
nope. There's like you're a square peg in a round hole Good
16:00
luck finding something else. And so I got cut
16:02
out the first week of college back,
16:05
right? I have bills
16:08
and it's like a week or two until
16:10
the pull out deadline,
16:12
right? You can pull out and get the money
16:14
back, right? Yeah. But if
16:17
it goes beyond that, you're on the hook
16:19
for it. And I'm like, I need
16:21
a job in two weeks. And
16:23
so I went and applied for everything. And
16:27
two jobs I got pretty far
16:29
along on. One was the hotel, working
16:31
in the graveyard shift, the hotel, and one was
16:34
a call center for
16:36
trying to talk people into giving
16:38
money to the university. That sounds like
16:40
even worse than the go down the list. Yes.
16:43
Look at books. Yeah. Yeah. Yeah.
16:45
Even worse because you're not helping people.
16:48
You're trying to talk them out. And I knew that that one would
16:50
be miserable because cold calling. It's not
16:52
inbound. It's outbound. It's outbound. I
16:55
actually know that I hate it because
16:58
when I was just one semester
17:00
back from college, my family was
17:03
living in Idaho. So this is after I went to Korea and
17:05
came back. My mom had a job lined up for
17:07
me when I got back. And it was my
17:09
uncle was in politics and running
17:12
for mayor. And
17:14
she's like, I got this great job for you. You're going to sit and you're
17:16
going to call and you're going to ask
17:18
people if we can send them material
17:21
about how great he's going to be for the job.
17:23
And it was
17:24
awful. Mm. It was. Thank you.
17:27
Nobody wanted to be getting the calls. No.
17:29
And I didn't want to be making the calls. And
17:32
so I knew the call center, but it's either that or
17:34
I can't afford school. Yeah. And
17:37
so you have to do, but yeah, the
17:39
lucky thing was I got
17:42
both jobs
17:44
and I got called first on
17:46
the call center one and they said,
17:48
do you want to take the job? And I said, how
17:50
long can I have? Yeah. And they're
17:52
like, well, we'd like you to take it now, but we have
17:55
a policy that you can have this many. It was like,
17:57
you know, 48 hours or something like that. But
18:00
you really should jump on it. It's a good job. And I'm
18:02
like, I'm gonna wait 48 hours. I will call
18:04
you hour number 47
18:08
and 50 minutes. And then
18:10
I just like, I need
18:12
to get this other job. And then the
18:14
next day, I got the other job. Next day.
18:17
Yeah. Wow.
18:19
So 24 hours between. Well, you
18:21
would have written anyway, I was gonna I was gonna say
18:23
that, you know, oh, no, you get this job and you never
18:26
write your books, but you would have written anyway. I
18:28
probably would have burned out on the other job
18:31
and found something else. Yeah, but
18:33
delayed you a few months delayed me a few
18:35
months, maybe hopefully, but
18:37
hopefully, that's all it would have done. Yeah, it wouldn't
18:39
have sucked my soul to the point that I just, yeah,
18:42
but I got the hotel job. And
18:44
I wrote every night at that hotel job. It's
18:47
a little more to the story that I haven't, I think
18:49
told, they called and said, we can
18:51
only give you three days a week. We can't give you
18:53
full time. Do you still want it? And
18:56
I ran the numbers. I'm like, I can
18:59
live barely on three
19:02
days at it was like 650 an
19:04
hour. Right? As long as the price of
19:07
ramen doesn't go up. Exactly. Okay.
19:09
I ran those numbers. I'm like, I can make
19:11
this work, hoping that I would eventually be able to
19:13
go to five days, which about six months
19:16
later, I was able to go to five days away. Nice.
19:18
Things like that. But did
19:20
you ever come visit me? Yeah, the
19:22
hotel we did. I know a lot
19:25
of people did. Yeah, I'm late, man. Yeah.
19:28
And you had I had a wife and kid, you had like
19:30
a real job and a wife and kid. Yeah. Yeah.
19:33
Back when I was single. And
19:35
you were the one with kids, you
19:38
would bring them to the magazine. Yep.
19:40
Little Isaac would toddle in,
19:42
could barely talk and you'd be like, hey, guys,
19:44
look at this. Hey, Isaac, what
19:47
do you do with a sword? And
19:49
little Isaac would be like, yes, stick it in a bad
19:51
guy. That's right, son. And
19:55
shout out to my son. Yep. He's in
19:58
army. He went,
20:00
yeah, I won't tell you his stories, but... Nope,
20:03
but he's out there... He's pretty happy. Fighting
20:05
dragons. And your other son, you have
20:07
two sons and multiple daughters. Three
20:09
daughters. Your other son makes swords.
20:13
Not swords yet. But knives. But
20:15
he is making beautiful knives now. He's
20:17
actually on his journey to becoming a journeyman
20:20
and then a master smith. Yep. So
20:22
you've got the soldier and you've got the blacksmith
20:25
to keep him equipped. So... Yep. Four
20:27
brilliant daughters coming up through the ranks. Three
20:30
brilliant... Did I just say four brilliant daughters? You said four, but
20:32
it's alright. Sorry, girls. There's
20:35
only three of you. Circling
20:39
back... Yes. ...to talking about writing
20:42
while having a job. That
20:44
skill that you talked about, being able to bounce
20:46
from one focus to another, is
20:49
trainable. You can get that. So,
20:52
you know, Brandon helping a person at the desk...
20:54
Yeah. ...or Ethan responding to the little
20:57
bell on the machine. Once that's over,
20:59
you can train yourself to get back
21:01
into the groove faster. It just takes
21:04
practice. You know, so you come home
21:06
exhausted after work. You
21:08
can sit down and force yourself to write
21:10
anyway and it's gonna suck at first, but
21:13
you can get better at it. You can. And
21:16
you can do certain things that'll
21:18
like put you in that, Oh, I
21:20
write now. Like make your brain
21:23
say, oh, this is what we're doing? Okay, this
21:25
is what we're doing. And one of
21:27
the ways I find
21:30
to help with that is to not let
21:32
the brain do what it wants to do, which
21:35
is after you mode shift, your
21:37
brain wants to do something easy. True.
21:39
That's been my experience. Like, so you
21:41
help someone at the front desk and then you're
21:44
gonna go back to your writing and your brain says, this
21:46
would be a great time to check your email. You're already interrupted.
21:49
Or, you know what? This would be a great
21:51
time to just relax. You already
21:53
got some work done and watch some YouTube or something
21:55
like that. And if you give into
21:58
that repeatedly, that will become. your
22:01
method of operations. You can train yourself
22:04
out of. Yeah. You will write,
22:07
help someone, waste a half
22:09
hour, finally force yourself
22:11
back into it, get interrupted, and then repeat
22:14
the cycle. I think this may
22:16
be apocryphal. I think it was Rex Stout though.
22:18
He wrote the Narrow Wolf books and
22:20
stories. I believe
22:22
it was him who said his writing
22:25
habits were such that you
22:27
just wrote for these periods of the day. Now
22:29
he was doing it full-time. Yeah. But
22:31
he would write and he would finish a novel.
22:34
And if he had an hour and a half left before his
22:36
time was up, you know, he just written the end. He'd
22:38
start the next one. He would start the next one and
22:41
work on it for 90 minutes and then go to
22:43
lunch or whatever. He would just, boop.
22:46
I am not that hardcore. But
22:49
it is a good mindset to be in that
22:51
once you finish a chapter, if
22:53
you've got enough time that you can spin back up a
22:55
little bit to start into the next chapter because
22:58
that'll make the next day that much
23:00
easier. For most of us, continuing
23:03
something that we've just barely started the
23:06
next day is easier than starting
23:08
from new. Yeah. Because your brain again has
23:10
spun up into the storytelling mindset.
23:13
And so you start off that chapter, you're
23:15
probably going to start it pretty strongly. So
23:18
that's been again my experience. But
23:20
it is this interesting thing where writing,
23:23
most of us can write at between 250
23:25
to 500 words an hour. Very common. A lot of people
23:27
can do
23:30
more, right? Sure. 250 to 750, I'd say
23:33
is pretty average. Which means
23:35
that you can do 2,000
23:39
words a week on
23:42
relatively little investment depending
23:44
on how fast a writer you are and
23:46
how much prep you're able to do during the week. Like
23:48
if you want to be close to that 750 or even a thousand
23:51
words an hour, usually that means you're
23:54
taking the time earlier in the week to jot
23:56
down notes and build yourself an outline. So
23:58
you're never stopping during that hour and being
24:01
like, what happens next? You already know
24:03
it and it's ready. You've played it out in your mind. I've
24:05
said before, very important to my schedule
24:08
is to go work out before I write, because
24:11
that's what I'm doing. I'm playing through each of those things in
24:13
my mind. So when I sit down, there's no time
24:15
of, oh, gee, what would be cool next? I
24:17
know each thing I'm writing
24:19
that day. And so while I'm writing
24:21
them, I'm focused wholly on how
24:24
great can I make this execution? Wow.
24:27
And I think that in
24:29
the years where I couldn't write as much, being
24:32
able to prime my
24:34
brain, as though I did sit down, I
24:36
was always closer to the thousand words an hour.
24:39
And that's two hours of work a week
24:41
to get a novel in the air. There
24:43
it is. Now, it's eight hours of work if you're
24:46
closer on the 250 side, right? But
24:49
it's not that much time
24:51
investment if you can train yourself in
24:54
the habits like you were saying. And it
24:56
does add up. I mean, I've been
24:58
distracted for 20 years for reasons,
25:01
but I've still continued to write and pushed at it.
25:03
Nothing like the output, obviously, if I was full
25:05
time. But when problems
25:08
will present themselves to my brain and I'll chew
25:11
at them in the back of my mind while I'm doing other
25:13
stuff. And if it's really, you know, mentally complicated
25:15
stuff, not a lot of cycles
25:17
go towards chewing on that problem. But
25:20
some does. And the subconscious
25:22
works on it. And when I sit down
25:24
and actually force myself to just start putting
25:26
words on the page, even if I don't have a solution
25:28
in my mind, the act of
25:30
forcing myself brings those solutions
25:33
out of my subconscious. They're in there,
25:36
but they're not going to present themselves unless you're butt
25:38
and chair
25:39
writing.
25:40
There's another aspect of this I wanted to dig into. It's
25:43
kind of a different take on it, but is
25:45
pretty important for the whole writing
25:48
while having a day job. You have
25:50
five kids, as we've talked about. I do. And
25:52
you have a wonderful wife who wants your
25:54
time and who probably
25:56
deserves it because you have left for multiple years
25:59
at a time. Yes, and you're back.
26:02
How do you explain to them? All right
26:06
Dad needs this Saturday evening to
26:09
go work on a story Oh Honestly,
26:13
I don't hmm.
26:15
No, I take that back. I have done that in the past
26:17
and they're very very Committed
26:21
to helping me. They want me to succeed as much
26:23
as I do at all these things But
26:26
honestly the real solution to this
26:28
one for me has been
26:30
Get up earlier
26:32
When they are asleep They
26:34
are neither asking for my attention nor
26:37
being denied my attention
26:40
which is Hard because
26:42
it involves getting up early, but
26:44
it's a solution Would you just get less sleep
26:46
then or would you go to bed earlier go to bed earlier?
26:49
I also work out for various
26:51
reasons. I mean Part of
26:53
my job description is to stay physically fit
26:56
Yeah, you know one hour a day is part
26:58
of my work schedule, which is amazing
27:00
and I thank you that happens early
27:02
and So
27:05
early that if I time it right I can
27:07
get an hour or two in the morning
27:09
when nobody else is awake Now
27:12
in the military It was not acceptable
27:14
to go from working out to hanging out in my room
27:16
for an hour and a half writing There was lots
27:19
of other stuff. They wanted me to be doing so I've
27:21
talked about this with you guys Sometimes
27:23
when I find myself done working out and I have an hour
27:25
and a half to kill I just go to work because that's
27:28
what my subconscious tells
27:30
me to do but yeah your wife loves
27:32
that For
27:34
some values are love. Yes Like
27:38
when you weren't working for us, you're supposed to take
27:40
time off equal
27:43
to the extra time you have to put in such as sitting
27:45
in the evening being on a podcast when But
27:49
I'm getting used to it. I'm getting better at
27:51
that. Yeah The military
27:53
is isn't very big on oh you
27:55
worked extra this weekend. You should
27:57
just take off a few days They do that all the
27:59
time Don't they? Yes all the time. That's
28:02
very common. Mm-hmm So yeah
28:04
writing with a full-time job is tough, but there
28:06
are solutions. Are you working on something right
28:08
now? I am working on the final
28:12
Well, I say final a major
28:14
edit to that book that you've referred to it that I
28:16
finished three times and gotten really
28:18
good feedback From my agent
28:21
Joshua. I introduced you to Joshua, right?
28:23
You did introduce. Yeah, Joshua You
28:25
came running down the stairs. We
28:27
were staying at your cousin's house That's
28:30
yes, because we my brother's
28:32
brother's house. Yeah, the Nebula
28:34
Awards were in New York Yeah,
28:37
and Dave one of our mentors
28:39
said hey you guys should go to this and I'm like,
28:42
I can't afford this scar You're
28:44
from Jersey. You're like, yeah,
28:47
I can get us there. I can get us a floor to stay on
28:49
for free Yeah, and I can help us navigate
28:51
the trains to get into
28:54
this thing So all we have to do is buy our tickets
28:56
in the door. Yep, which was pretty cheap
28:58
for students It was like, you know, like 30 bucks
29:00
or something. So that's all we had to do and of course Air
29:03
Flying Fair Which was yeah expensive but
29:05
helped us save some time. We go to
29:07
the Nebula Awards I'm sitting in the
29:09
bar twiddling my thumbs never having
29:11
really had to go in a bar and make
29:14
small talk Yes, and you
29:16
come running down the steps. You're like I met Simon
29:18
Green's agent. We really like Simon
29:20
Green And we're rising blue
29:22
moon rising and the hawk and Fisher books Yeah And
29:25
you grabbed me and towed me up the stairs
29:27
and introduced me to this guy who eventually
29:30
became my agent and then yours Yeah
29:33
So books spend back and forth to
29:35
Joshua several times and every time
29:37
it comes back It's got a major suggestion
29:39
that is really a good idea and I'm
29:42
putting into place the latest one I won't say
29:44
the last one the latest one. I hope it's
29:46
the last one because I think it's really good It's coming into
29:48
shape, but
29:49
that's what I'm working on It's
29:50
a fun book. Do you want to say
29:53
anything about it or do you want to leave
29:55
it quiet? Oh, it's far future
29:57
military science fiction men
29:59
in power Man in Power Armor. Yep.
30:02
Ben's Reddit.
30:06
How is
30:07
it, Ben?
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