Initial Observations

Mel - The villain is the hero of his own story. And it was great to get into the mind of a psychopath, especially through the first-person narrative, seeing how he leaves red herrings for whoever is trying to get him and start seeing the good guys as his antagonists while wanting him to succeed.

Parul - Another great story where we have great innovations of the Love Genre mixed with the thriller genre to give us an engaging narrative drive.  Reminds me of Killing Eve.

Randy - Awesome.  Compelling story, well told.

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