Podchaser Logo
Home
How Your First Ten Pages — Or AI? — Will Determine if Someone Finishes Your Script

How Your First Ten Pages — Or AI? — Will Determine if Someone Finishes Your Script

Released Thursday, 14th March 2024
Good episode? Give it some love!
How Your First Ten Pages — Or AI? — Will Determine if Someone Finishes Your Script

How Your First Ten Pages — Or AI? — Will Determine if Someone Finishes Your Script

How Your First Ten Pages — Or AI? — Will Determine if Someone Finishes Your Script

How Your First Ten Pages — Or AI? — Will Determine if Someone Finishes Your Script

Thursday, 14th March 2024
Good episode? Give it some love!
Rate Episode

Episode Transcript

Transcripts are displayed as originally observed. Some content, including advertisements may have changed.

Use Ctrl + F to search

0:09

Hello, everybody. Welcome to the No Film School Podcast

0:11

for the week of March 14th, 2024.

0:15

I am Charles Hain. I

0:17

am here with Gigi Hawkins. Hello.

0:19

And it always does feel weird to say 2024. Yeah,

0:23

I'm not with that. I'm not on

0:25

the board for that. Let's go back to 2023. I

0:29

was about to say 2020, I know. Thank you. Yeah. Also

0:33

here with Jason Hellerman. I want him to say hi. Good

0:35

morning. You know, if we're talking

0:38

2020, we are at the historic

0:40

four year anniversary award

0:42

of the whole world shutdown. So,

0:45

happy anniversary of the shutdown, guys. Does anybody

0:47

else go back and reread their emails from

0:49

that week? Oh my God.

0:51

I just did. Please

0:53

share, Charles. No, I mean, it's just

0:55

a thing, right? Where you like, like, you clearly just did

0:57

it. We hadn't talked about it. I do it, like, probably

1:00

every year. I didn't do it in 22, but I didn't

1:02

in 21, 23 in this year. Where, like, you do a

1:04

little Gmail search for, like, all my emails from, like, March

1:06

8th to March 20th, 2020. And just, like, watching the wave

1:08

of realization

1:11

of understanding of, you know, like, emailing with someone you

1:14

work with that you're like, I guess I'm not going

1:16

to see you for three weeks. And then it's like,

1:19

I didn't see that person for two years. I

1:21

don't know if I told this anecdote on the

1:23

podcast, so whatever, this bunch of episodes, maybe you

1:25

guys forget. But during, I was

1:27

pitching with my friend, Amy, a TV show.

1:29

And during the pitch, an assistant ran a

1:32

note in, which happens, you know, more than

1:34

you'd like, mostly because it means someone really

1:36

important is calling. And I remember the executive

1:38

looking up and being like, like,

1:41

that COVID thing, it's real. And we're shutting down

1:43

the office. And like, I'm so sorry we'll redo

1:45

this on Zoom. And then just covering their mouth

1:47

and leaving the room. And Amy and I just

1:50

sitting there and being like, Oh,

1:52

shit. Like, what do we do now?

1:54

And then we like left, went to the

1:56

parking lot. Everyone at this company, I won't say which

1:58

one was just get was getting. in cars and

2:00

leaving at the same time as us. And then we

2:02

were like, do we hug goodbye? And she's like, I'm

2:05

okay if you're okay with doing it. And I was like, yeah, I

2:07

guess we do it. Like, I don't know if you are

2:10

carrying this unseen disease, we hug goodbye, don't see

2:12

her for two years. Oh my God. I mean,

2:14

it's all on Zoom. We did do that Zoom

2:16

pitch. It didn't go great. You know what? I

2:18

will say, it doesn't matter. That was like quibby.

2:20

So it was totally fine. But I just, you

2:26

know, visceral memories. And I don't know. How

2:30

much is out of your control? Yeah, exactly.

2:33

Oh my God. There's so many bigger things

2:35

moving at all times. Also, that executive when

2:37

they were like, we're shutting down the office

2:39

had no idea that they were also shutting down the company.

2:42

Yeah, never. Yeah, we never got

2:44

an official pass because I think

2:46

the world officially passed on them.

2:48

So I was at the

2:50

fear scene school and I was about to

2:52

shoot on the soundstage. We like arted this thing

2:55

for an exercise. You're going to shoot a scene

2:57

from Ingrid Goes West and one of my favorite

2:59

movies and Julia Salomonoff, who was the

3:01

head of the directing program at the time and

3:03

is now the head of fish is directing

3:05

program, pulled me and another

3:08

classmate aside, the other one who was supposed to direct

3:10

and she was like, well, we're shutting

3:12

down and you get to

3:15

decide technically you can still shoot tomorrow.

3:17

But and I was like,

3:19

I don't want my actors who are

3:21

working for free and they're my friends

3:23

coming and then dying. That was what I

3:25

thought was going to happen. And so I

3:27

was like, I can't do it. I

3:29

can't do it. Never shot it. And

3:32

lots of stuff that never I never saw it

3:34

again because I moved to LA. Yeah,

3:36

that's what happens. I think it's an interesting

3:38

look. But now we're here four years later. We

3:40

did it. We did it. Kind of. We did

3:42

it. I was on that

3:44

same soundstage and I had found

3:47

a source for bleach wipes that wasn't sold

3:49

out and I brought a bunch there.

3:52

And so we had like a stack because

3:54

I was assuming in two weeks we'd be back and bleaching everything. And

3:56

then I remember being back on that soundstage when the

3:58

building reopened eight months later. and thinking of the time

4:01

like, oh, wow, all our police wipes have fried out without

4:03

realizing that it would still be two more years before. Yeah,

4:06

yeah. I had a similar again, and we

4:08

can get off that. But like I had

4:10

ordered I lived with two roommates at the

4:13

time. And I got really into like Costco

4:15

bulk stuff the months before by accident. And

4:17

I had so much toilet paper that like

4:19

the toilet paper lasts us through the entire lockdown. But

4:22

there were people who I was like DMing

4:24

being like, oh, I I could drop

4:26

a roll off at your ass if

4:28

you're out. I was the toilet paper

4:30

king of COVID for Incentri City for

4:32

a little bit of time. Anyway, that's

4:34

probably still paying off in the relationships

4:36

you built. Yeah, there's

4:39

a lot of toilet paper friendships I developed then. Yeah.

4:41

All right. So we've got a bunch of topics this

4:43

week. The first thing we're talking about is Nikon acquiring

4:45

red. Big news that we should talk

4:47

about. We're also then going to talk about the

4:49

first 10 pages of your screenplay. We're going to

4:52

talk about AI screenplay coverage. You

4:54

can guess what we're going to say, but you might as well

4:56

wait. And then we've got a really

4:58

good ask from school that I have a surprising, not

5:01

surprising to people who hear me all the time,

5:03

but probably surprising to the person who's asking answer

5:05

to this week on the No Film School podcast.

5:16

Your career in virtual production starts

5:19

here. And now earn

5:21

your spot on tomorrow's set with Synapse

5:23

virtual production in LA by

5:26

enrolling in RIT's immersive 10 day

5:28

course this June. An exclusive

5:30

experience in LA, you'll get the

5:32

foundation you need to grow your career

5:34

in a virtual production studio. The kind

5:37

behind the groundbreaking effects seen in Disney's

5:39

The Mandalorian and Marvel's Avenger films.

5:41

Limited seats are available. Learn

5:43

more and enroll today at VP

5:46

RIT certified education.

5:49

That's VP dot

5:51

RIT certified education.

5:55

Only on Disney. My name is Taylor.

6:00

Hey

6:05

there! Did

6:26

you know Kroger always gives you savings and

6:28

rewards on top of our lower than low

6:30

prices? And when you

6:32

download the Kroger app, you'll enjoy over $500

6:34

in savings every week with digital coupons. And

6:37

don't forget FuelPoints to help you save up

6:39

to $1 per gallon at the pump. Want

6:42

to save even more? With a Boost membership,

6:44

you'll get double FuelPoints and free delivery! So

6:46

shop and save big at Kroger today. Kroger,

6:49

fresh for everyone. Savings may vary by

6:51

state. Restrictions apply. See site for details.

6:54

Alright, first topic, this week Nikon bought RED. The example

6:57

that comes to mind is... look,

7:00

for some reason the internet RED gets a lot

7:02

of shit and I don't know why. Like I'm

7:04

not a RED fanboy, like the cameras are fine.

7:06

I wish they weren't named things like the weapon

7:08

bomb because when you fly them through airports that's

7:11

annoying. Like they're... Yeah,

7:13

the branding aesthetic was always strange to

7:15

me. But whatever, people got branding and

7:17

it is what it is. But like

7:19

you cannot deny RED sped up everyone

7:21

else's timeline on digital cinema. After

7:24

the RED one came out and we started seeing it on

7:26

big movies, everybody else had to get much faster and like

7:29

they shook up Sony. It took Sony a

7:31

long time to catch up. It made Airy

7:33

move faster. They have innovated in the

7:35

industry and made interesting products. And I do not

7:37

know always why the internet is so mean to

7:39

them. The phone was whatever. But

7:43

Nikon bought them and everybody's kind of surprised.

7:45

And one of the big reasons we're surprised

7:47

is that the big asset RED has left

7:49

right now is... I

7:52

mean they make nice cameras and we've all shot projects

7:54

in RED and they look great. But the big asset

7:56

they have left is they've got a good patent on

7:58

what's called compressed raw. podcast

8:00

I'm not going to get too

8:02

nerdy on compressed raw but basically

8:04

every other camera manufacturer out there the reason

8:06

why it's often an external recorder like when you

8:09

go ProRes raw you're going out to an Atomos,

8:11

Black tragic raw unless you're on a Black magic

8:13

camera you're going out to the Black magic video

8:15

monitor for Alexa for a long time you were

8:17

going out to like a Codex recorder for raw

8:20

and the reason why is internal raw inside the

8:22

camera read out a patent and you

8:24

had to pay read a license fee which eventually people

8:26

just broke down and paid now everybody took a swing

8:28

at this patent Apple took a swing at

8:30

this patent and you better believe Apple's got lawyers Sony

8:33

took a swing at this patent you better believe

8:35

Sony has lawyers GiniTech

8:38

now if you guys don't know GiniTech I kind

8:40

of love GiniTech they made up a whole bunch

8:42

of crazy YouTube videos about this GiniTech makes like

8:44

I don't I hesitate to say knockoffs well

8:47

they make like other branded products for

8:49

red so you know the red magazine

8:51

is like a thing called a red

8:53

bindi mag it's just a bunch

8:55

of SSD chips in a

8:57

thing and like from reddit $600 from and from GiniTech

9:01

it's like $180 and GiniTech took

9:03

a swing at the patent and

9:06

didn't pull it off and then Nikon

9:08

is the last people to try and win the patent

9:10

war with them lost

9:12

in court recently and then we're like ah fuck

9:14

it we'll just buy you which

9:16

is interesting that it's an icon because like

9:18

theoretically Sony and Apple

9:21

have more money although Apple probably

9:23

doesn't want to own a camera manufacturer but

9:26

like why didn't Sony buy and the

9:28

theory everyone is operating on right now

9:30

is Nikon is still really big in

9:32

the still space not really big in

9:34

the motion picture space right their

9:36

lens mounts not popular in motion pictures Canon

9:38

is still like their RF mount is on

9:40

the yeah red red uses RF mount

9:43

for their new lens mount for their new

9:45

cameras they do autofocus through RF they do

9:47

all that and strategically it

9:49

actually makes more sense for Nikon for anybody

9:51

else because this buys them into motion pictures

9:55

and they already have red branding they got that little

9:57

red dot on their camera so it was like

9:59

fate Yeah, it's hard to

10:01

beat the branding question.

10:04

Jordan wrote a really great article in no

10:06

film school about the acquisition and what's

10:08

these were like ramifications or what's happening and

10:11

look, all consolidation I think is hard in

10:13

the industry just because I do think it

10:15

takes out the some of the

10:17

innovation. But from Nikon's point of view,

10:21

creating a film camera was

10:23

just going to cost probably more

10:25

than it cost to acquire a company. And

10:27

this is

10:29

a no brainer thing if you want to stick around and

10:31

be one of the marquee brands and get into film, you

10:33

know, where are we gonna go despite the

10:35

you know, was it Rodrigo Preito on the Oscars

10:37

thing? You know, I want people to wait Von

10:40

Heutemann. Yeah, I don't know why.

10:42

There's a lot of names in there. But yeah, you know, encouraging

10:44

people to use 35 digital still the

10:46

most accessible. Certainly, you know, with our readers, I think,

10:49

I think most people have an opportunity to shoot on

10:51

even though you can take Charles's 35 35

10:54

millimeter class. Yeah, bookland 35

10:56

millimeter.com June 17 to 28.

10:58

Yeah, I

11:00

mean, I think there's look, obviously,

11:02

everyone saw that john Oliver thing

11:04

about why Boeing keeps crashing because

11:06

the McDonald Douglas Boeing merger. So

11:08

like mergers have a terrible rap,

11:11

for good reason, like people, thousands of

11:13

people have died because the McDonald Douglas Boeing

11:15

merger, thousands of people are not going to

11:17

die over this merger, right? And we

11:19

are in an interesting space in the

11:22

market where like at the same the

11:24

same day this was announced, borrow lenses

11:26

sold to lend lens rentals.com. Yep. And

11:29

that news got overshadowed by the red Nikon news.

11:31

But I also thought it was really interesting. Because

11:33

that one is actually somewhat more interesting in that

11:36

that is a true, there's not really only one

11:38

place you're going online for people

11:40

to ship you lenses. There used to be

11:42

like three competitors for like, oh, they're all

11:44

nice. Now, that is really consolidated

11:47

to I'm renting locally from a rental house. I'm

11:49

renting locally from share grid. Yep. Or if I'm

11:51

going to the internet, I'm going to lens rentals.com.

11:53

Now I like rental and rental.com and they're in

11:55

Memphis. So they're overhead is low and they've always

11:57

had a nice product and they're big nerds. and

12:00

they do really long posts on how they

12:02

evaluate lenses. I liked

12:04

that they're very upfront nerds about glass. So

12:08

it is interesting. I think the

12:10

other interesting, I mean, there's two big things

12:12

here. One, why is Jim Jannard willing to

12:14

sell? I think we forget that this

12:17

was his second business. He started Oakley in

12:20

the 70s and then sold Oakley to Luxottica

12:22

and then Red was his retirement business. Yeah.

12:27

Yeah. 19 years is enough time to be like, you

12:29

know, I've done this, let's sell it. And

12:31

then the other thing is like, yeah, I think it's

12:33

really a smart strategy for Nikon to get back a

12:35

footprint in the motion picture business. I

12:37

think in a couple of years, it'll just be

12:40

Nikon cameras. These will be the Nikon motion picture

12:42

cameras. I think we will inevitably see the Nikon

12:44

lens mount adapted by the next generation of RED

12:46

cameras because that's the big benefit to them. Then

12:49

they'll start selling a lot more glass if

12:52

natively you get the best autofocus out

12:54

of your Nikon RED cinema. So

12:57

it'll be interesting to see what evolves. I don't think

12:59

they'll do another phone. I think they learned that lesson.

13:02

Yeah. So

13:04

look, it's a natural evolution of camera

13:06

makers and people have things to sell,

13:08

right? How do we sell our lenses? How do we do these

13:11

things? And I think, you know, I'm

13:13

excited for where it can go. And honestly,

13:15

it does. At least it's like a marquee brand. It's

13:17

not like they were bought by somewhere that I think is

13:19

like going out of business. You know, to

13:21

me, it's like, all right, like, we'll see what they can

13:23

push this brand and the doing. I

13:26

like that. Now I can go to my

13:28

friends that are DPs and be like, what

13:30

do you think about Nikon acquiring RED? And

13:33

they'll be like, you know that? Yeah, I know. I

13:36

mean, that was always, I have to say that

13:38

was always one of the arguments I made behind this

13:40

podcast is like, at your typical prep

13:43

meeting, there's usually chit chat, like you're meeting in a

13:45

production company, you're meeting at a post house, you're meeting

13:47

on a job and there's like chit chat at the

13:49

beginning. Yeah. Part of the goal of this

13:51

podcast is like making you prepared for the chit chat. I

13:53

love it. I agree.

13:56

Yeah. I

13:58

think it's a frankly, it's going to be I think it's a

14:00

better fit than Sony or Apple and I'm glad it wasn't Sony

14:02

or Apple. I'm glad it was Nikon because they

14:04

have more to gain from it. It'll be

14:07

interesting to have Nikon glass as a

14:09

common mount in motion pictures. I think

14:11

Canon already has some interesting bodies that

14:13

are worth shooting with. Sony obviously does.

14:15

Yeah. And I think Apple would have

14:17

let it squander. Like I think

14:19

Apple wanted the ProRes RAW patents for

14:21

other reasons. Yeah. I worry always

14:24

with Sony or Apple doing this because they're also in the

14:26

movie buying and making game that

14:28

it suddenly becomes, oh, you're shooting a Sony

14:30

movie. So you're obviously shooting on our Sony

14:32

cameras, right? Like, well, they, they already do

14:35

that. Exactly. Right. Like

14:37

if you limit the limit of choice is a danger

14:39

in itself. Yeah. That's true. Although,

14:42

yeah. This episode is

14:44

brought to you by Paramount Plus. Get in loser.

14:47

Mean Girls is now streaming on Paramount Plus.

14:49

Join Katie Heron as she meets the classics

14:52

and Tina Fey's new twist on the modern

14:54

classics. Get ready for more of the rumors,

14:56

backstabbing, and jokes you loved in the original

14:58

movies with some of the best surprises. Rated

15:00

PG-13. Wear pink. And

15:02

head to paramountplus.com to try it free. Hey,

15:07

it's Kaylee Cuoco for Priceline. Ready to go to

15:09

your happy place for a happy price? Well, why

15:11

didn't you say so? Just download the Priceline app

15:13

right now and save up to 60% on hotels.

15:15

So, whether it's Cousin Kevin's Kuzoo

15:17

concert in Kansas City, Go Kevin! Or

15:19

Becky's Bachelorette Bash in Bermuda, you never

15:22

have to miss a trip ever again.

15:24

So download the Priceline app today. Your

15:26

savings are waiting. They're

15:28

saving their waiting. Go

15:30

to your happy place for a happy price. Go

15:33

to your happy price, Priceline.

15:36

Alright. Up next, the first 10

15:38

pages of your screenplay. That's new. Yeah,

15:42

it's funny. Last week we covered this human coverage

15:44

thing. We'll get to the ad coverage later. A

15:46

thing called The Gauntlet and it was like this

15:49

big, buzzy thing that came out that was very

15:51

expensive. I don't know if we're going to test

15:53

it because it was so prohibitively expensive. But the

15:55

idea was like, oh, this personal reader

15:57

script. And if they get through the first 10 pages.

16:00

pages, then they'll pass it up the ladder and the

16:02

internet was on fire with like, what

16:04

do you mean I'm paying $380 to

16:06

hope that seven people read past the

16:08

first 10 pages of my script? And

16:11

that's an entirely different conversation of, yes, that's

16:14

a ripoff. But

16:17

the first 10 pages thing I think is something was isolated

16:19

from there. And look, I thought what I think was saying

16:21

like 20 pages, whatever,

16:23

but those of us who were

16:25

assistants and then became executives,

16:28

I called some of my friends and they're like, Oh, we read

16:30

10 pages. And if it's 10 pages,

16:32

it gets us into the story, then we'll

16:34

give it another 10, you know, and obviously

16:37

there's people who skip around or do things, but the first

16:39

10 pages of your script are incredibly

16:41

important. And it's almost impossible to

16:43

understate how important not just from an intention

16:46

span point of view, but just from actors,

16:49

directors, cinematographers, agents, managers, lawyers, they're

16:51

all giving this thing 10 pages

16:53

to figure out, okay, who's

16:55

in this movie? What

16:58

audience are we trying to hit? What's

17:00

the world? Like what's the risk of marketability? Is it

17:02

a four quadrant movies, one quadrant movies, any is it

17:04

a studio, is it whatever? And then also like, what's

17:06

the genre? And all of

17:08

those are distilled pretty much in your first 10 pages.

17:11

And I do think, you know, in this era of

17:13

like, people seeing runtimes getting longer and

17:16

different stuff, they're still forgetting that no matter

17:18

what, whether you're killers of the flower moon

17:20

or past lives, you know, the two spectrums

17:22

of film length or driveway dolls,

17:24

which is like 79 minutes, no matter

17:26

what in those first 10 pages, you know, who, what

17:29

is this movie and who is it for? And that

17:31

winds up being the biggest question asked in Hollywood today.

17:34

I think being in this phase

17:36

of post production on my feature and

17:38

the first 10 pages or the first

17:40

10 minutes are where I'm having the

17:42

biggest pain points. I'm feeling

17:45

this early the pain

17:47

of not having had the first

17:49

10 pages like perfected before. And

17:52

I've made this mistake in the past. I've

17:54

made the mistake in the past of shooting

17:56

people go into a location and it's like

17:58

shoe leather when it really. the first

18:00

10 pages are this opportunity to

18:02

set up the expectation for

18:05

what kind of movie it's going to be.

18:07

Like, are you watching a movie about, like,

18:09

a sorority slaughterhouse? Like, we have

18:11

to see a kill in the first

18:13

10 pages. I, uh, probably

18:15

in the first page or so.

18:17

Like, you're teaching the audience how they're going

18:20

to be watching the movie. And,

18:22

and it's very, it's such a complex

18:24

thing because you have to get into

18:26

the story, but you also have to

18:28

be providing context. And that is,

18:31

that is tough. To be able to pull it all

18:33

off, that is very tough. What's

18:35

interesting to me about this, this strikes a bunch of thoughts

18:38

on me. The first is that, like, Sundance

18:40

Lab is always, the first round of Sundance Lab

18:42

for the last 25 years has been five pages.

18:44

Yeah. So, like, I don't think the first 10

18:46

pages is that big a flag for me because

18:49

what, what it's really saying, I mean, my wife is

18:51

driven nuts by this because, like, I'll turn a

18:53

movie off 10 or 15 minutes in all

18:56

the time. Yeah. She's like, but you have

18:58

to give them time. And I'm like, no,

19:00

no, no, I gave them 10 minutes. Yep.

19:02

And like, they told me in the 10

19:04

minutes, everything that I need to know about

19:07

what they're setting up, I'm talking about like

19:09

within industrial production, are there movies like Kianascati

19:11

where the first 10 minutes doesn't set up

19:13

a mid transition? Sure. And I love

19:15

Kianascati and I got very high and I watched it in

19:17

college and it blew my mind. But like, I'm

19:20

talking about like, I use this

19:22

term a lot and it's not a negative term.

19:24

It's positive. Industrial production. We were talking about

19:26

movies that are made within the industry that are designed to

19:28

reach a mass audience that tell a story that have characters

19:30

that have a world that have a pitch, that have a

19:32

log line. And like, if I'm watching a movie

19:34

that's intending to be that and I watch the first 10 minutes and

19:36

I'm like, I fucking hate all of these people

19:39

and you haven't given me any tension, mystery or suspense,

19:41

and you haven't made me like, and I'm not with

19:43

any of them. Like, why would I

19:45

give you another 10 minutes when it was your job to

19:47

put that in the first 10 minutes somehow? Yeah.

19:50

So like, I totally am fine

19:52

with like the opening 10 pages because it is a

19:54

good discipline to get into. Like as

19:56

when I was reading 25 years ago, creative

19:58

artists, I always read the the whole thing. But

20:01

I tell you what, I knew everything

20:03

I was going to write about 10 or 15 pages in. Then

20:06

I was reading, trying to

20:08

decide if anything, and

20:10

sometimes about 10 or 15 pages in, I

20:12

would read the last 10 pages and be like, am I right

20:14

about the last 10 pages? I'd be like, yeah, I am. I'm

20:17

going to read the middle really quick so I can write this

20:19

coverage because you didn't do anything. You

20:22

didn't surprise me, you didn't twist anything. It was exactly what

20:24

the first 10 pages set up, and the first 10 pages

20:26

weren't interesting. So the first 10 pages are fine.

20:29

The flag for me is the $300, and

20:32

the reason why the flag for me is $300 is 10 years ago, on

20:36

No Film School, before I ever wrote for No Film School, when

20:38

I lived in Los Angeles, I read an

20:40

article on No Film School, before I wrote for

20:42

No Film School about Thunder Thunder, which

20:45

is a straight up scam. Yes. Straight up

20:47

scam. It was $300 entry fee. You

20:50

had to have a fundraising trailer, already shot for your production,

20:52

you had to have a script. I

20:54

submitted and I won, me and someone else

20:56

won. We won Thunder Thunder. I had half

20:58

of the financing for my film, and

21:01

it was great. I have no idea how many

21:03

people submitted, but I know many people did because

21:05

I personally know a few people who did who

21:07

had screenwriting things, and it was great. It was

21:10

a fun year meeting with the complete scammers who

21:12

ran Thunder Thunder. None of the,

21:14

there were a bunch of industry mentors on the

21:16

site. I primarily took it seriously because Cashion always

21:18

was on the site. I was like, well, I

21:20

know Cashion's work. If Cashion's on this site, he

21:22

must trust these people. It's worth $300

21:24

roll of dice. I already have a fundraising

21:27

trailer, why not? I had a bunch of meetings at Thunder Studios,

21:29

and I was like, oh, you guys are shady as hell. Then

21:32

eventually, one person emailed me and was like, oh yeah, we're

21:34

never going to make these movies. This was a racket I'm

21:36

quitting. One person from Thunder,

21:38

very nice person, total respect for them and then

21:40

he quit. As far

21:43

as I can tell, it was literally just a racket to

21:45

get a bunch of $300. Because

21:47

if you get a thousand people to apply, that's 300,000. He

21:50

probably didn't get a thousand, but he might have gotten 500,

21:53

and that's $150,000, and

21:55

that's something. Wow. I

21:57

knew from the first meeting, I was suspicious because I

21:59

met the CEO. in the first meeting and he

22:02

was not interested in me at all in a

22:04

way where I was like, you were about to finance,

22:06

you are about to put money in me, you should

22:08

be evaluating. Even if you don't want to be

22:10

friends with me, you should be trying to get a

22:13

read on whether or not your investment in me is

22:15

going to go well and you

22:17

are not and that is weird. So

22:20

the thing for me is just because it's the same

22:22

$300 price point that made me think

22:24

of Thunder, there's been a lot of inflation.

22:28

If I had heard you say 380 instead of three,

22:30

I wouldn't have thought of Thunder, but also

22:32

there's been a lot of inflation by then. So let's say

22:34

this is like $200 in 2012 dollars. It's

22:39

got a very impressive list

22:41

of industry mentors, right?

22:43

Like Don Bollinger is great, Shane Black

22:45

is great, Solomon is great. There's a

22:47

whole lot of like very... Yeah,

22:50

I mean, there's so many incredible voices,

22:52

diverse voices, right? But

22:55

I would like to see more of, yeah,

22:57

Michelle Amour, Hila Cooper, like I would

22:59

like to know more about how they're

23:01

involved. Because yes, finding... I

23:05

think we can all agree

23:07

that like the

23:10

system for getting good scripts into the

23:12

hands of people who can do something

23:14

with them needs continual evolution. Yeah, and

23:16

it hasn't. It really truly has not

23:18

in a long time. Yeah,

23:20

I mean, the blacklist is the last big revolution.

23:22

Yeah, 10 years ago, yeah. Yeah,

23:24

exactly. Yeah. Or I mean, almost more than 10

23:26

years ago now? Yeah. Oh, you are right. More,

23:28

probably 12, close to 15. Yeah. So

23:32

I think that this is like

23:34

the 10 pages thing. I mean,

23:38

in reality, yes, your coverage reader

23:40

who's paid to read your script in full will read

23:43

more than your 10 pages. If your 10 pages are

23:45

not good, no executive is going to read past them.

23:47

Yeah, anyway, three was the one. It's funny, because back

23:49

in the day, three were like the first three pages

23:51

I could always tell. If it's a comedy, I haven't

23:53

laughed, then that's gonna be a problem through the whole

23:56

thing. If the drama and I don't feel

23:58

something, then It's

24:00

like if it's an actual movie and you're opening set

24:02

piece sucks, they probably all suck because you want your

24:04

opening one to be one of the best, if not

24:06

the best. But like, it's like the

24:08

gauntlet, I feel like conflicting without trying

24:11

it. I do think, look,

24:13

their heart's in the right place. They're like, what's the pipeline way we

24:15

can get it? Let's put a price

24:17

high enough where we can actually pay these readers

24:19

real money. If you have seven

24:21

people reading, so it's like a divergent

24:23

taste. You're set, let's say

24:25

you submit a horror script, it's not going to

24:27

the person who wants to read pretty, pretty princess

24:29

scripts. You can define it. There's lots of good

24:31

things about it. Without us paying the 380,

24:34

hard to knock it. But I do

24:36

think the system shock of people who

24:39

don't interact in Hollywood or don't have

24:41

connections here to learn that 10 pages

24:43

is a litmus test or whatever.

24:45

I think, like they said, 20 is like, yeah,

24:48

20 is generous. People have things to do. And if

24:50

it sucks for 20, even if your last

24:52

80 are amazing, you're

24:54

screwed. I don't have to tell you. I

24:57

mean, the biggest thing for me, even more than the field, like I

24:59

agree on the laugh, I agree on the feeling. The biggest thing for

25:02

me is in seven to 10 pages,

25:04

I should know who the characters I'm going on the

25:06

journey with are. And if you

25:08

have not done the work to find a way to tell

25:10

me who they are and why I give a shit about

25:12

them, like regardless of who they are,

25:14

like, what are you showing me that makes me like,

25:17

ah, yeah, I'm on this journey with this person. I'm

25:19

like, that's Max Rakatanksky and

25:22

I am in. That

25:25

is the job of the

25:27

first 10 pages. And

25:29

if, you know, go watch all of your

25:31

favorite movies and break down

25:34

the first 10 minutes of the movie and you

25:36

will have been given the things that will bring

25:38

you along for the rest of it. Yeah.

25:41

I mean, my favorite example for this is

25:43

the all three Godfathers. They all start on

25:45

parties. Right. So the first one is a

25:47

wedding and you meet everybody at the wedding and kind of get

25:49

the stakes. What's going on? What's

25:51

happening? Is a first communion,

25:53

I believe. Right. Godfather Part

25:56

Two. It's like you meet everyone, you get the stakes.

25:58

Oh, now there's a senator. Now Michael's in charge of family. Las

26:00

Vegas. The third one is Michael getting

26:02

a medal from the Pope and you're

26:04

like, oh, okay, this is about religion. This

26:06

is about these people. Here's the dynamics. And

26:08

like, that's, those are

26:10

three ways like Francis for cobra, like mirrors

26:12

all three movies, but it's also really smart

26:15

ways to get us completely into up to

26:17

date what's going on in this world and

26:19

why do we care about these people at

26:22

this point in our lives. And it's just like, these are easy

26:24

ways to do it, you know, and those movies

26:26

to kind of define the genre and the way they're

26:28

supposed to be. Well, and

26:30

like going back to the godfather in the

26:32

opening 10 minutes, we learn about Don Corleone.

26:35

We learned that he has a very specific

26:37

code of honor. When, when

26:39

the baby asked, well, no, it's not

26:41

just that it's, this is not justice. The baker says,

26:44

I want you to kill these men. And Don Corleone

26:46

says, but your daughter's not dead. Like

26:48

you immediately know something and are intrigued

26:50

by him as a character, because

26:53

he is not out for revenge.

26:55

He has a code of justice. He's government

26:58

and exile or whatever he is. And you

27:00

are curious because of that. Yeah,

27:02

that's what you have to do in the first 10 minutes. You have

27:04

to give me that specific thing that makes me like, who's this? Yeah.

27:07

And that's what that opening scene

27:09

does so well in the godfather.

27:12

And you're not even, I mean, it's like

27:14

four or five pages of other dude

27:16

talking before he even talks. He's just

27:18

playing with the cat. I believe in

27:20

America. Two scenes gives this amazing speech.

27:23

Yeah. And then we see him one more time in the whole movie. You

27:26

know you need protein to fuel results,

27:29

but it's not easy when you're drinking

27:31

the same bland chalky shake every day.

27:33

Stop punishing yourself and get to GNC

27:35

for the best protein in the game,

27:37

including all the hottest brands and crave-worthy

27:39

flavors that'll keep you coming back for

27:41

more. We're talking protein that legit tastes

27:44

like cookies, your favorite cereals, indulgent desserts

27:46

and more. So bust out of

27:48

your protein rut and actually look forward to those

27:50

shakes with unbeatable protein at unbeatable prices.

27:53

Fuel your fitness with protein at GNC.

27:56

it's interesting. And I think like, well, maybe like

27:58

a natural segue into our next topic. But

28:00

it is what you're talking about is a

28:02

human reaction to what's going on in the

28:04

first 10 pages You know like a visceral

28:06

thing of like I care a lot about

28:09

the people in this movie or you know Or

28:11

TV show, you know, depending on what you're reading

28:14

I care so much as I want to keep

28:16

going and that's always the battle that any writer

28:18

writing anything or any editor putting together a movie

28:20

or director whatever like That's the

28:23

war you wage in the first 10 minutes, you know,

28:25

so like her first 10 pages So,

28:27

you know we transition naturally How

28:30

do you fight that war against the computer

28:32

when AI is covering your script, you know,

28:34

how do you how do you know?

28:36

What what do you do? Okay, so

28:38

this yeah, this is a great transition

28:40

to the most depressing thing ever which is Jason wrote

28:42

a great article this week I mean an

28:44

article or Jeremy ad or like a call

28:46

to burn the machines I don't really know

28:49

but it was like, you

28:51

know, apparently I'd missed this I

28:53

mean, thank God for I guess I'm also warm

28:55

to the government because it's like seven real human

28:57

beings with you in heart to pay Taxes reading

28:59

your script because apparently there's a thing where it's

29:01

like an AI can read your script and evaluate

29:03

for you Which like I'm teaching a

29:05

class on AR I art this fall. I'm open day.

29:07

I've used it a little bit in post The

29:10

idea of AI evaluating your script is fucking

29:12

horseshit and it is like such

29:14

a racket to sell that to

29:16

people Oh my god, you know, we

29:19

the range of cash, right? We

29:21

tested a website that does it for $10.

29:23

There's I found one that charges over a

29:25

hundred dollars again Not for human beings, you

29:27

know, we can get it into the cash

29:29

markup later because I found that to be

29:31

incredibly fascinating What it actually cost these people

29:34

right but since you're not paying a salary

29:36

per script Well, you know what? I'll just say it right now.

29:38

It's around 30 cents to 50

29:40

cents a script not a

29:42

page Entire scripts if you're charging

29:44

10 bucks your markups pretty high if

29:46

you're charging $100 your markups ten

29:49

times that Again without any over

29:51

it you're not paying for out there. You're not paying

29:53

for whatever. You're just doing it, you know, whatever Hey,

29:56

look, I think the essential argument comes back

29:59

to taste right? Like when

30:01

I hear about Charles' favorite movies, when I hear

30:03

about Gigi's favorite movies, we have these conversations, I

30:05

get a sense of their taste. Where do we

30:07

align? Where do we maybe differ? You know, and

30:10

that's what makes, what's what

30:12

makes this podcast tick, or any podcast

30:14

tick, right? But it's also like what makes a

30:16

friendship tick. I know what I could recommend to

30:18

Gigi that I think she'd like, but I also

30:20

know, you know, a movie I could tell her

30:22

that she'd have a horrible afternoon probably watching Irreversible,

30:24

you know? Not up or

30:26

out of the way. But with Charles, you know,

30:28

I know we could talk Coliana Scatsy, you know,

30:31

back and forth for a long time. You know,

30:33

I think if I'm going to go see Dark

30:35

Side of the Oz, you know, Charles would be

30:37

the number one invite. But I'm probably not going

30:39

to send him Transformers Rise of the

30:42

Beast, you know? So it is like, you're figuring out

30:44

what those tastes are, and you're figuring out like, oh,

30:46

if I was going to work with you to these

30:48

two people on different things, it would probably align closely

30:50

to what our tastes align to. And that, what AI

30:52

is doing is just saying like, hey,

30:54

I'm comparing your script to

30:56

the zeros and ones for whoever

30:59

programmed my tastes. And, you

31:01

know, I'm using tastes very loosely here, because

31:03

it's not tastes, right? Whoever programmed what algorithmically

31:05

I've decided is good, you

31:07

know, I'm going to evaluate based on that set, right? There

31:10

are two ways that AI can do this, and we cover

31:12

it in detail in the article. The one

31:14

way is having a database of screenplays, you know, like

31:17

for the past, I don't know, onset of the internet

31:19

since 1996, whenever the internet

31:21

came around and you could download the PDF of

31:23

your favorite screenplay. I remember downloading

31:25

JAWS and it took a day in 2001 and

31:29

now it's like a continuous split. But,

31:31

you know, where those

31:34

scripts, they're either

31:36

sucked into a database in this, you

31:38

know, learning language model, LLM, and

31:40

you're evaluated based on what it decides are the

31:43

commonalities in that, that's one way to do it.

31:45

A lot of companies deny doing it that way,

31:47

even though we kind of have proof they do

31:49

it that way. The reason they denied is they

31:52

don't want to say they're using copy written material

31:54

to make money. The other way,

31:56

the way that money claim to say they do it

31:58

is And. I

32:01

feel like you know we aren't We have articles on tropes

32:03

and like how to write a screenplay of these things to

32:05

be in their The Blake's Diabetes at etc. We have a

32:07

be cheap. I love the beach seat. I think everyone should

32:09

be using them. Whether you're reading on a

32:11

weird indie or our stadium with yes I think

32:13

that really helpful but. Let's. Say they've.

32:16

Schooled, Again, heavy quotation marks their

32:18

ai language while on that what they're they're

32:20

doing is using a I to stay and

32:22

what does beats could be to then regurgitate.

32:25

To. You but your stories theoretically is

32:27

about and then also. Have. A

32:29

way where you would need notes and again like these

32:31

are. Say. Things like your time

32:34

to an amorphous machine who isn't. Really?

32:36

Deciding if it. Understands Michael

32:38

Corleone his motivations to suit the Police

32:40

chief you know, unpaid spaced He: it's

32:43

just saying hey this is an hundred

32:45

and eighty paid script and they out

32:47

seventy minutes and T V and whatever

32:49

page the says this is happening I've

32:51

identified as beat as this. What

32:54

if it was earlier? You know it's

32:56

is like not a not a note,

32:58

it's just a suggestion based on algorithm

33:01

and unfortunately people are paying money for

33:03

this am. Mostly I think for it

33:05

was. A Ten dollar one.

33:07

I know lot of people using says it's cheap

33:09

Ten dollars as. And for say

33:11

that the price of like a Venti

33:13

Starbucks strength with one ad on in

33:16

a cell like relatively inexpensive and also.

33:18

You. Know we can't like pay for play. How do I

33:20

get into the and I don't live your i live

33:22

in a gypsy like you know I live in wherever.

33:25

You know Nepal had a why get access to

33:27

Hollywood and I don't have to pay whatever the

33:29

the blacklist as I can. Hundred bucks in front

33:32

of a waste of inserted a host your script

33:34

side one thirties? you know what if I got

33:36

thirteen of I was sun sets of well thirteen

33:38

times the computer to tell you anything you want.

33:40

you really just need one human to read it.

33:43

I don't think a good to peer valuations in

33:45

the giveaway em. Music. So.

33:47

Many emotions about a ice a paradise. The

33:49

it's hard to. Talk about it in

33:51

assessing man. It's also we keep

33:54

in teaching in this fantasy that a I

33:56

can think. He. I to not fucking

33:58

sick. It. Is Not. Humphrey handing

34:00

characters and their motivations and

34:03

their goals. Hideous. an elaborate.

34:05

Could. Be that can do. Highly

34:07

sophisticated. Auto correct in predict what word comes

34:09

next. Yes, so it analyzing the words and

34:12

looking for it and the what it's doing

34:14

is like you know a major a common

34:16

thing between sequence seven integrate is a reversal

34:19

right? There's a big setback for shipping reversal

34:21

him and thought you know the character has

34:23

to deal with it right? It is analyzing

34:25

reversals from other movies. It's looking for common

34:28

words in those reversals and then it. Seeing

34:30

if you have scenes with those similar common

34:32

words it doesn't understand states it doesn't understand

34:34

why something counts as a reversal. It is

34:37

interesting. To see if you have the same word

34:39

so if you're reversal. Is five

34:41

pages earlier, but there's a really good reason.

34:43

the enemy human reading it would understand. Yeah,

34:45

they're not going to get that, but even

34:47

if you're reversal is really interesting. Relic babies

34:49

completely without dialogue because we can to see

34:51

what's what's happening with the action where no

34:53

one has to say oh no, the situation

34:55

is reversed. But like we immediately get it

34:58

because you britain it's a well when you beat it

35:00

Visual for cinema. If anyone understands it,

35:02

the Ai will be like, but none of

35:04

the characters express their frustration at the reversal

35:06

and are not yes about traffic. So like,

35:08

what the fuck. Like. Actually punishing

35:10

because here's the the goal of figuring

35:13

out all this form stuff. Is.

35:15

To play with it is to deal with.

35:17

It is to understand that audiences know this

35:19

and have fun with it, right? That? that's

35:21

why you know that Shane Black Scraped I

35:23

mean to my cup was very talented regulator.

35:25

But one of the things he does really

35:27

well as he plays with structure and he

35:29

knows that audiences know structure. And

35:31

he will tease things about structure because he

35:34

knows, but only to a subconscious level. We

35:36

sorta know what's coming next. And. He'll

35:38

dance with it and it's like one of

35:40

the joys of his scripts. So. To.

35:42

Rob writers of Be Bloody To

35:44

Do That. And to say

35:46

like you know to it becomes a keyword guessing game.

35:49

And it's a it's yeah. Ai

35:51

Ai has some things that can

35:53

do. I. Have value waiting.

35:56

Creative screenwriting is not one. Yeah.

35:58

And can write with Bdr. In our organ,

36:00

organize something around him. it isn't there were

36:02

they don't like. Seventy four percent of the

36:04

time, it's long enough yes, that that's near.

36:07

The it's You know it's such it's in southern. I'm

36:09

just wondering. You know, Edu or a

36:11

writer here like. Would would

36:13

you use? It: How would you use a savvy?

36:15

use it? Yeah. At

36:18

such it's it's such an it is

36:20

actually bringing me back to this. This

36:23

feeling I had when I was

36:25

learning how to write and learning

36:27

structure because these fundamentals are so

36:29

important for understanding. How story

36:32

works. So. You can have that

36:34

creek debt so you can subvert it

36:36

and play with it. And also there

36:38

is this moment where. I let

36:40

myself go, let structure bow, and sort

36:42

of let it become the subconscious thing

36:44

with and me I would. I still

36:46

love each. He says celebrating down scripts

36:49

in both directions like both. In

36:51

fact for writing and also some

36:53

learn how a story was structured.

36:55

And how it works That pretty was

36:57

that intuition that is a fierce human.

36:59

The A I saw lead the only

37:02

thing that I as a writer can

37:04

bring to the table. That. Makes

37:06

my work unique and my boys such when

37:08

it when I could almost forget the structure

37:10

out of at a certain point like that's

37:12

where my best work came from in it

37:14

only came in the last. Two. Years

37:17

it took. You. Know years and

37:19

years of work and failing to

37:21

get to that point. So what?

37:23

My fear is. Is if I

37:25

looked if I came up with the structure

37:28

of knowing these that there is systems looking

37:30

for how to optimize and sort of like

37:32

essentially as Ceo. Your scripts.

37:35

I. Would have fallen into this

37:37

structure trap that would have. Suppressed.

37:40

My voice as an emerging creator

37:42

and. And it's it's.

37:44

really, it's really depressing. Air and

37:47

I I I know some folks

37:49

who are exploring in this space.

37:52

The. The the one thing

37:54

I can. See.

37:56

Being a positive. From. this

37:58

and this would be implements a

38:01

system with a

38:03

lot of barriers. But

38:08

people have shared scripts with me where I'm like, wow,

38:10

you have not done that work. You have not read

38:13

McKee. I bet

38:15

I know you all have read these scripts or you're

38:17

like, wow, you haven't even read a script before.

38:19

Like you, there's, so if the A could just

38:21

weed out that

38:25

sort of structure. And then I have to

38:27

also give the biggest caveat to this because

38:30

like the script of Moonlight

38:32

was a mess. If

38:34

you look at it from the perspective of

38:36

how the industry reads scripts, I

38:38

don't remember who it is, but somebody very

38:41

famously passed on Moonlight and in

38:43

my friend group, or maybe it was one of you two.

38:45

It all blends together. Everything

38:48

good has been passed on by somebody. Exactly.

38:50

The true thing about Moonlight is the characters

38:52

are compelling. Yeah. Like

38:54

there might not be, although that ending has

38:56

some very traditional screenplay moments in it in

38:59

terms of reversals, in terms of stakes, but

39:01

like the truest fact, like I

39:04

don't think AI is going to help weed out the people

39:06

who haven't done their homework. Cause I remember when I was

39:08

reading Creative Artists again, 25 years ago, and

39:11

there would be scripts and I was like, how did this make

39:13

it to Creative Artists? Like there's nothing here.

39:15

This isn't a thing. Like this is, nobody makes any

39:17

sense. And I don't understand what's going on. Why

39:20

are they here? I don't get it. But like somehow they made

39:22

it like, you know, we all

39:24

want to, you

39:26

know, we all want to do things slightly beyond

39:29

our skillset. And I don't know that AI, I

39:31

mean, maybe AI could help. Maybe AI

39:33

could help at a very fundamental like, do

39:36

your, are your characters compelling

39:38

check? Or like are

39:41

like spell, elevated spell check.

39:43

Like is this formatted correctly?

39:45

That I would fucking love.

39:50

That would be amazing. Yeah. Is

39:52

that where I get in my head? And I pay money for

39:54

people to, I have a service

39:56

where I pay like a hundred bucks to

39:58

have somebody go through. and make sure

40:01

that one, just basic selling stuff, but

40:03

also like, is this reading in the

40:05

most streamlined way? Like,

40:07

is this the smoothest read? And a

40:09

lot of it is just like taking

40:11

out things that get in the

40:13

way of the read, like, oh, technically you're

40:15

introducing a lawyer here. And it's very technical

40:18

stuff. It's not story, it's not character. It's

40:21

like the tax that

40:23

you build everything else on. One

40:26

of the things I'll say, look, there are some

40:28

services. I'm not gonna mention

40:30

them just because I don't know if they would

40:32

like that I mentioned or not, but I

40:34

talked to the founder of one of them. And

40:37

one of the things they do is when you

40:39

pay for this, you also get a private

40:42

YouTube video link to a table

40:45

read of your script that AI does, and you

40:47

can assign the voices to it. And

40:49

it's your whole script, right? So like, let's

40:51

say you're 90 page, whatever,

40:54

romantic comedy, it's

40:56

a table read of it. And you can hear

40:58

the dialogue out loud, and there's

41:00

a narrator voice, and you assign all the voices before you send it in, right?

41:02

And you get it quickly. And I thought- I

41:04

think you can do that in Highland too. Okay,

41:07

and this is better. It

41:09

sounded better, right? Because I listened to

41:11

it. It did sound better. Did it

41:13

sound as good as me calling Charles and

41:15

Gigi to show up and read character lines?

41:18

No, because there's no real emotion behind it.

41:20

But you can- But you say you can

41:22

assign voices. Is it like Irish woman and

41:24

French man? Or can I have like Christopher

41:26

Walken, Robert De Niro, and- I

41:29

think it's just Irish woman and French man. It

41:31

is like that. You can assign whatever, like accent.

41:33

I mean, again- Can I have Homer Simpson do

41:35

one of the parts? That's how close we are. I

41:38

think we are probably close to that in terms of

41:40

whatever. I thought that was, I told the guy. It

41:42

was like, that to me was something I might use.

41:45

Because if I just wanted to listen, I couldn't

41:47

get a group of friends together, maybe I would

41:49

use that. Because it's easy, right?

41:51

Like whatever. And the better those voices

41:53

get, I think the better shape we're

41:55

gonna be in. But the worry

41:57

always is like- I

42:00

love working with an actor who has a take on a role

42:02

that you didn't see coming. I think

42:04

we just watch the Oscars, Mark Ruffalo and Poor

42:06

Things, whether you like it or not. He's so

42:08

goofy and funny in that movie, and he breaks

42:11

a lot in the movie and starts laughing, but

42:13

they left it in because his character is a

42:15

buffoon. So it makes sense. And I'm like, man,

42:17

I don't know if on the page I would

42:19

have read him that way, but that's such a

42:22

good embodiment. And I will never be able to

42:24

do that because it's just going to see things through

42:26

one lens. I mean, Nick

42:28

Cage and Moonstruck. Yeah, Nick Cage and

42:31

Moonstruck. Yeah. Yeah. Like

42:33

I watch Moonstruck clips on YouTube like four times a year.

42:35

My wife and I watch Moonstruck together every Christmas. Like it's

42:37

just so pure. And like what those

42:39

two brought to that. I mean, for me, I

42:41

guess the AI table read, the thing I love

42:43

most about table read, I learn a lot at

42:45

a table read. Yes. But

42:47

I get my most out of the table read standing around

42:50

for an hour with everyone talking about it. Like

42:52

that's what you really, and like the

42:54

people you ask to read it because they take on the

42:56

character for the two hours, even if they're not an actor,

42:59

they're going to have thoughts. They're going to be like, you

43:01

know, it's weird to start like I started to get here and I

43:03

was like, why am I doing this in this scene? And

43:05

then you're like, oh, maybe I haven't laid that out

43:07

well enough. Maybe I haven't like it's so

43:09

and like, I guess I may I could say that I guess

43:11

I guess an AI could be like, why am I I don't

43:14

understand why I'm stabbing. Why am I

43:16

doing? Yeah. Yeah. And who

43:18

am I? It's a frustrating, like it's a

43:20

frustrating mix. I'm always looking at like, what would I use?

43:24

And I don't I just don't know that I use

43:26

any of it. And that's kind of what I told

43:28

all these people who know, like, we're no film. So

43:30

we get a lot of solicitations. You go through, I

43:32

tried testing out when they give it to me for

43:34

free. I'll always take a free thing. You know,

43:36

like I wish the gauntlet sent us it for free. I would

43:38

have loved to test it for free. But the idea is like,

43:41

just like what are we using? And I always come

43:43

back to this thing, John Gary, who's a great writer,

43:45

and we've written before coined this term called the Hope

43:47

machine, right? And that's what Hollywood is. It's this Hope

43:49

machine. You always have perpetual hope that tomorrow you could

43:52

become famous. The worry I always

43:54

have is the companies that profit

43:56

off of that Hope machine, right? Like there's

43:58

already so much quote unquote, free work

44:00

and different things. If you are charging people

44:02

to be involved, to become a cog in

44:04

the hope machine, where does

44:06

that end? And AI is the most

44:09

disingenuous form of that because it doesn't

44:11

even have what essentially has brought us

44:13

all to Hollywood, which is the desire

44:15

to entertain human beings. And if you

44:18

don't have that baseline level of what

44:20

you're paying for, then what are you

44:22

paying for? And at the end of the

44:24

day, you're paying for an algorithm that is

44:27

probably, let's say, 18 months away

44:29

from being completely moot because chat GPT at

44:31

some point will just do this. That's

44:35

how these are all engineered through open AI. So it's like,

44:37

at some point, you'll just be able to upload your PDF

44:39

and get the bullshit from

44:42

a computer. So why are we

44:44

paying this middleman? This

44:46

is pure unmitigated bullshit straight from

44:48

the origin. Single source

44:50

bullshit. I

44:52

also want to sort of add

44:55

on to this idea of

44:57

companies that are capitalizing on

44:59

the dream and taking advantage

45:01

of it and differentiate

45:03

that from resources for people

45:05

who are looking to get

45:08

feedback on their script and

45:10

improve upon it. I think it's

45:13

so easy to feel like you're in this bubble

45:16

when you're writing by yourself and it's lonely

45:18

and it's scary and you're like, is

45:20

there anything here? I have no idea.

45:22

I have no perspective anymore. And it's

45:24

very normal in Europe to have a

45:26

script doctor like that somebody who comes

45:28

in and is essentially there to pressure

45:30

test the story and poke holes in

45:32

it. And there's some amazing people that

45:35

I've worked with here who have helped

45:37

me take my ideas to the next

45:39

level, whether it's like a one-sided getting

45:41

feedback from what is it called? Slamdance.

45:43

Slamdance has an amazing feedback

45:45

assessment and you pay a little bit more to submit.

45:48

And I've gotten amazing constructive

45:50

feedback that's actionable from their

45:53

services. There's also on the page a woman

45:55

named Pilar who will work with you to

45:57

get to certain points

46:00

Jimmy at the script butcher who just

46:02

like has the, he reads the script

46:04

three times and like marks it up in

46:07

this incredible way that unlocks the story for

46:09

you. And, and I've talked about

46:11

Matt Starr, who like is the UCB guy who

46:13

has a write your pilot class. And like, to

46:15

me, it's like, these are personal trainers for

46:18

your story. So you can, you don't have

46:20

to be alone. You don't have to rely

46:23

on like, like getting it

46:25

out there in these ways where people are

46:27

like promising you things. I think you can,

46:29

you can put it out there. You can

46:31

workshop it. You can like find ways to

46:34

engage and then of course, you know, get

46:37

it to the best place possible and then get

46:39

it out into the world. But yeah, I think

46:42

I can envision a lot of people turning to

46:44

these types of services and specifically to AI because

46:46

they're like, I'm lost. I'm stuck in

46:49

this story and I don't have any perspective on there

46:51

right now. Yeah. I mean, unfortunately, and

46:53

I put this in the article, that's

46:55

why you have to make friends. Like

46:58

it's like, it's why human

47:00

interaction is the most important thing

47:02

at the end of the day, getting

47:04

somewhere you may believe with the actual act and

47:06

read your script is it's a hard man. I

47:08

mean, look, I don't, I don't know if I

47:10

was living at home that I would have the connections

47:12

I have in LA. Of course I would not. Right.

47:14

And I spend time out here actively trying to have

47:17

these friendships. So I don't have to pay for these

47:19

other people to read things, but there are still people

47:21

I do and people I trust and whatever. And usually

47:23

I try to orchestrate buying the dinner around it or

47:25

whatever, or they're an executive who is going to read

47:27

it anyway because they want to make money from it.

47:29

But you know, and that's what it boils down to,

47:31

right? In Hollywood we're making movies, sure, because

47:33

we have a passion and TV, but there's

47:36

also a monetary end, right? When your script

47:38

gets hot off the black list or whatever,

47:40

it's because people think it could make them

47:42

money, right? Like doing that. And it's not

47:44

about people saying, great, though, Jason's

47:47

script thought he'll give us money. Right?

47:49

That's, that's sort of the dichotomy here. And I

47:51

do think like we are due for

47:53

that next big leap forward. I thought the black list

47:55

was really cool when it was invented,

47:57

not just the list list, but the website. Hey,

48:00

here's a direct source that's just, it's not

48:02

for notes. It's a litmus test on whether

48:04

or not you are writing at a professional

48:06

level, whether or not your idea is something

48:08

that might be able to succeed in Hollywood.

48:11

And then a database for executives,

48:13

agents, managers, whatever, to go on and

48:15

say, hey, I'm trying to fill the

48:17

need for an erotic thriller. Let me

48:19

sort by the highest rated ones on here. This

48:23

seems like a good one that's rated high. I trust

48:25

these readers because they work in Hollywood. I'll

48:27

give it a look, right? That's, that to me

48:29

is like an essential good. There

48:31

are plenty of these AI sites that are now

48:33

offering like a leaderboard and different things, but it's

48:36

that gamification. Like we talked to, remember when, like,

48:38

look, Robinhood got suits for this dumb money. If

48:40

you watch it, I think it's on Netflix. Like

48:42

that's what they got in trouble for, you know,

48:44

sending up fireworks and you buy stocks, doing stuff.

48:47

The gamification of whether or not you can buy

48:49

into this industry has been an issue for a long

48:51

time. We've seen it with some of these shadier contests, the

48:53

people who run, let's say like the websites

48:56

that run like 10 to 25 screenplay contests

48:58

a year. It's like, are they really weeding

49:00

out the wheat from the chaff or are

49:02

they just, you know, grinding up the same

49:04

slop and feeding it to the pigs? You know, like, what

49:07

are we figuring out here? And I do think at the end

49:09

of the day, my advice to anyone trying to break in is

49:12

either save up your money, don't

49:14

do it 10 times, save up your money to be able

49:17

to do it once after you've done multiple drafts and gotten

49:19

friends to look at things, to submit

49:21

to a blacklist type thing. Again, it's like around

49:23

130 when you've taken hosting. Save

49:25

it up once rather than doing it 10

49:27

times on something that

49:29

can't have a reaction. Also, these AI

49:31

sites aren't, they're not introducing you to an

49:34

AI agent and AI manager. You know, they're

49:36

not consolidating. They're just taking your money to

49:38

tell you whether things are good or not. And

49:40

can they really tell you anything besides just

49:43

structure? Not really, and they can't even really

49:45

do that. So what are we doing here?

49:48

I mean, the unfortunate thing is

49:50

one of the things, I

49:53

mean, for me, I feel a little bit like about AI

49:55

the way I did about 3D 15 years ago, where I'm

49:57

like, okay, everybody's talking about how this is gonna change. the

49:59

industry and then and fifteen years we're gonna look back and

50:01

be like remember we talked for a i was missing in

50:04

three like I don't know that is going to change things

50:06

as much as people think it is. But.

50:08

It's also like. The same

50:10

with Crypto. It's just a it's just a

50:12

machine for grants. yet like. A Crypto

50:14

Like outside the film industry there weren't

50:16

many film crypto graphs but I it

50:19

became a like do you you know

50:21

people who trade. Stocks. Make

50:23

a lot of money and you want to make a lot of money.

50:25

And here's an animal into it and it's like the same thing of

50:27

like. It. It's automating

50:29

a system of shaking people down in

50:31

a way that I like. It infuriates

50:33

me, fight, it just makes me very

50:35

mad. Some like. There. Are.

50:38

People who want to find you know it's a

50:40

natural human thing to want to tell stories. And.

50:44

The like are not for now I'm assuming

50:46

street. Well actually no Youtube into Copper the

50:48

dominant media of our time. But for those

50:50

of us attach the dominant media of the

50:52

twentieth century most efficient pictures It It is

50:54

still like an industry where you can tell

50:56

the stories and and people want to participate

50:58

in it and send a card and taking

51:00

advantage of that. Is.

51:03

Is awful. Yeah. Guys, I think rub some. I

51:05

think I'm going to bump this as know from school the next

51:07

week. Oh yeah, Zero area. So

51:10

beat We'll be back next week with an interesting answer

51:12

to a know from school which is not for dad.

51:14

an answer for sad that. Would. Have on

51:16

the oven for like yeah he was again, having gotten.

51:18

Will. Don't an audience the I wait

51:21

mass best athlete and ask. I

51:24

got on the internet, mostly on blue sky,

51:26

sometimes en masse on trial. same. I'm.

51:30

At Last. And Graceland. And geez, he hadn't

51:32

set some. At. Jason Elam in

51:34

decent know feels good I am. Semyon.

51:37

For yeah I think that of their semi everything

51:39

but I know that I just will ask the

51:41

same questions on the time and until I get

51:43

a good answer or t basket. And.

51:46

Tomorrow we're gonna have a

51:48

an interview from the slammed

51:50

Anselm Love and Work which

51:52

was made in two weeks

51:54

and for ten thousand dollars.

51:56

And it's an unconventional more

51:58

like experimental theater process. The really

52:00

wanna get out of the industry and

52:02

do something different? Tune in to that.

Unlock more with Podchaser Pro

  • Audience Insights
  • Contact Information
  • Demographics
  • Charts
  • Sponsor History
  • and More!
Pro Features