I like the story, it is promising, writing is good. This sounds like it has been done on a shoestring budget. It needs voice actors, editing & production. Be prepared for coughs & sneezes & failed lines not edited out, & sound fades in & out. But I still enjoyed it.!

Got a bit of a breakers feel to the storyline which has potential. Just needs a little more finesse in the production and would benefit from voice actors. 2.5 stars